Hello everyone this is my poetry book!, it took a long time to finish because it was hard to think of what to write for all of them, I hope that you guys enjoy!
I Hope you guys enjoyed my digital poetry book! Please leave some feedback on which you liked it or not. What poem was your favourite?.
Friday, September 14, 2018
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kia ora angel, I'm Piper from parkview parua school.i really like your poems. they remind me a lot of my poetry book i did back in 2017. maybe next time you could try to add a bit more creativity to some of your poems. anyway i really liked it.
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Kia ora angel, it's your awesome friend Kayla.
ReplyDeleteI loved your poems did you do those in 2017? because I remember doing them too. It looks like you have put a lot of work into it. My favorite poem was definitely the tanka penguin one it was really funny. I also like the bits in between with the pusheen cats. The one thing that I think would make it better was if you added music somehow. I liked all of your poems and I thought they were really good and funny.
Kayla
Kia Ora Angel!
ReplyDeleteI'm Jayde, From Marshland School
I quite enjoyed reading your digital poetry book, it was amazing, but some of the poems sounded like they were trying to rhyme but didn't quite get there, maybe go back and edit some of them. and don't try to hard next time?
Thanks!
Jayde.
Hey, This is Aaliya, I love all the poems, I love how you said that pugs are sometimes secretly Unicorns LOL:) Love your poems. keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteHi, my name Is Jessica and I'm from Rawhiti school :) and I really enjoyed the visual enjoyment of seeing each slide. It looks like you put a lot of work into it. I'd love to see many more of these similar slides
ReplyDeleteHi our names our Mak and bluebell from Rawhiti school. Wow love this slide and your poems are great.😍😍😍 Maybe next time add more pusheens!!!
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